Monday, March 25, 2013

The Ricochet [ A short story by ThaNaijaPOET]




Advisory Content:
This poem contains strong language and explicit sexual and violent content.


The Ricochet

Olumide always considered himself
God’s own gift to mankind
He was tall
Handsome and

Was physically carved
Like a Spartan
He was also smart

But like most mortals
Olumide also had his flaws
He was evil
Perhaps
Tagging him evil might be an understatement
Olumide was an embodiment of evil

At different points in his life
He had embraced violence in its extreme
Just name the act
And Olumide had either done it
Or was in the process of doing it

One of his landmark deeds
Was an encounter with an old man
On a very cold evening
Shortly after the heavy rainfall

Olumide was bored
And to make matters worse
He was also broke and hungry
He knew he could easily get food nearby on credit
But his ego counseled otherwise

It therefore didn’t come as a surprise
When he slowly rose from his bed
Put on a shirt, jean pant and boots
And set out to find a solution to his problems

For a very strange reason
He decided to veer off his familiar route to the major road
And opted for a muddy terrain as a shortcut
Olumide hadn’t walked for more than 4 minutes
When he looked up from the wet and muddy floor
And saw the silhouette of an old man
Approaching from a distance
With each step Olumide took
The distance between the approaching old man and himself shortened
Also
With each step came the evil whisper
Olumide had become familiar with
And always embraced

The old man wasn’t too far off now
And the voice in Olumide’s head
Told him precisely what to do
Once the old man was within his reach

Just as the old man was about to walk past Olumide
Olumide suddenly moved off course
And took a bold step off the straight line he had been walking
And stepped right in front of the old man
Automatically blocking off his path

The old man who had his head lowered all along
Slowly looked up to see who or what had blocked off his path
When his eyes fell on Olumide’s face
He neither smiled nor frowned
For this man was four times Olumide’s age if not more
And was not a stranger to evil

Without waiting for Olumide to speak
The man dropped the heavy sack he was carrying
Looked back at Olumide and said:
“My son, all I have on me
Is the money from the toothpick I was able to sell today…
I beg you in the name of your creator
To spare me
My daughter is very ill
And the N500 is all that I have to buy her drugs
And feed my family today
God will provide for us tomorrow…”

The man was about to go on
When Olumide threw a hard right-hand fist into the man’s face
Throwing the old man backwards
And falling hard into the wet floor
From the impact
Olumide knew he had just broken the old man’s nose
 Even as the old man groaned in pain
Still on the floor
Olumide moved in

He picked the man up from the floor
And while holding him erect with one hand
He swung his massive fist across the old man’s jaw
The impact not only broke the old man’s jaw
But sent saliva, blood and three teeth flying into the brown mud
Just as he was about the drive his boot
Into the old man’s face
A move that would have killed the old man instantly
And left him with a broken neck
Olumide’s eyes saw money
In bits and pieces on the floor

He abandoned the man
Walked towards the money
And began picking them up
And after he counted
He had a total of N500
Without any hesitation, he stuffed it all into his pocket

As he was about to leave
He took one last look
At the old man who was barely moving
His shirt all bloodied
The mixture of mud and water on his body
And the countless pieces of toothpicks that lay scattered
All around the old man
It suddenly occurred to Olumide
That indeed
The old man had told the truth

He was almost tempted
To return the money to the man
And help him up
But the slight bulge in his pocket
And the dark voice in his head
Helped him make up his mind
As he began walking away

He looked back for the very last time
And saw the old man crying and sobbing
As he picked up a blood-stained toothpick…
Pointed it at Olumide
And howled out loud in agony
A bolt of fear
Cursed through Olumide as he heard this
But it was already too late
As the wheels of nemesis
Was already set in motion
He looked away quickly and just kept walking

After spending N400 on Suya and N80 on locally prepared alcoholic drinks
Olumide stepped out from the bar
And beckoned to a scantily dressed girl
As the girl got close enough
Olumide grabbed her big buttocks
And dragged her close to his chest
She looked straight into his eyes and said:
“Short time is N1, 000 and TDB is N2, 500
But because you saved me from police yesterday
Just buy me a drink”

He gladly obliged and just before he stepped out of the bar
He moved to pick a toothpick off the tray close to him
But hesitated for a brief instant
As the scene of his encounter with the old man
Flashed across his mind
Olumide instantly killed the flashback
Picked up a single stick of toothpick
Put it in between his lips
And headed home with his sexy prize

He had barely opened the door when he unzipped the girl’s short blouse
And grabbed her again
But this time from behind
She had the kind of body
Capable of giving a man an erection
In less than 30 seconds
And in 45 seconds
Olumide was as hard as an ice cube

He was not one to indulge in foreplay
And while the girl had her back to him
He expertly slid her lacy pants off
Used one hand to place her hand on the bed post
As he guided himself into her

Olumide knew the size of his manhood was far above average
And he enjoyed the audible breath that escaped the girl’s lips
As he penetrated her
She groaned and moaned as he held her hips still
And thrust in and out of her
This went on for another 20 minutes
Altering her position from time to time

At a point, he had her lying face up
Her back on the bed
And lifted both her legs
Off the bed
Placed them on his shoulders
And penetrated her wetness once again
Her depth spurred him to ride her
His length and size made her grab the sheets
Fists clenched like the claws of an eagle seizing a prey

He rammed into her
Like a carpenter knocking a nail into a wall
And moans of pleasure escaped her throat
After a while
He felt the girl’s body begin to vibrate
As she approached orgasm
She began to moan and gasp for breath
As she held on tightly to him
And climaxed
Shortly afterwards
Olumide also reached his sexual peak

She had a cold shower
Got dressed and told him:
“You’re good and I like you
But next time, I’m going to charge you”
He smiled at her and winked at her as she stepped out of the room

Olumide sat up in bed
Regurgitating the effect of his orgasm and smiled
Slowly shifting the position of the toothpick between his lips

Without any warning
Scenes of his violent encounter with the old man
Flashed across his mind again
As if this wasn’t bad enough
Graphic scenes of his rape victims, their tears and blood also came reeling
He remembered Aishat
How he had brutally raped her
And cut her from time to time with a knife to instill morbid fear into her
He recalled Nkem
And what he had done with her corpse after raping and snuffing the life out of her
How remembered the look on Emeka’s face as he stabbed him in the chest
Pulled out the knife in a flash and slit his throat
He remembered the little girl walking along the dark road barely a week ago
And how he had grabbed her when no one was looking
Knocked her unconscious and delivered only her head to his client

Olumide knew he was a product of the society
Where corruption, greed and quest for power reigned supreme
However
For some strange reason
The thought of turning a new leaf now had him in a vice grip
And he switched the toothpick
To the left side of his lips and decided
That he would think deeply about his life
In the morning
At the moment
The only thing on his mind was sleep

As he lay back on the bed
With the toothpick still playing on his lips
He wondered if he could really ever change
For the better
He was certain he could
But one thing he doubted if he could ever bury
Were memories from his past

Within seconds
He closed his eyes and slept off

Sometime shortly past midnight
Olumide’s eyes shot open
Not because he couldn’t sleep
But because he was in agonizing pain
He felt as if an Olympic athlete
Had driven a javelin through his entire neck

He wanted to scream out in pain
But he couldn’t
There was something in his throat
And it stabbed against the walls of his esophagus

He couldn’t see it but he knew there was blood
Trickling down his throat
He would have preferred to stay still
But he felt a pain of a hundred needles
Constantly stabbing at his throat from the inside

He was on his feet now
Olumide jumped all over the room
Like a man having a choking fit
Indeed he was beginning to choke
The more he panicked
The deeper and harder the sharp edges stabbed into his throat
And then he remembered
The toothpick

The knowledge did nothing to help
In his panic
Olumide tripped on an electric cord lying on the floor
And he wheeled forward
Crashed his head into the window
And before he could stop himself

His bare neck slashed across the sharp edge of the louver
Tearing his neck open
Blood gushing out
As he frantically grabbed his neck with both hand
Choking on the pain and blood
Already flooding his throat
And choking him to death

Before he slumped
He slammed his 95kg frame through the door
Trying to break the door open
But failed
As he slumped
He saw in the blurred distance
What looked like a bloodied old man
Holding a blood soaked toothpick
And screaming out in an eternal howl of agony…




Composed by Samod Biobaku [ThaNaijaPOET]

Dedication
Specially dedicated to all those who love me despite my seemingly strange nature. I’m also dedicating this to my new friends all over the world. You all know yourselves and I love you all.


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2 comments:

  1. This is lovely!

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  2. I love this. Almost forgot I was reading a poem. It felt like watching a good movie. Goon one and I hope there will be more?

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