Friday, April 05, 2013

The Last Bus Stop - Part II [a short story by Tha Naija POET]








Advisory Content:

This poem contains some strong language.



Just as he was about to speak, her eyelids slammed shut
And her head began to move from left to right like a child hurriedly trying to say no without using words
The only difference was that her head was moving a lot faster

“Baby, are you okay?”
Lanre asked the question
But he already knew the answer

Lanre was trying very hard not to panic
He didn’t understand any bit of what he was seeing
And then just as suddenly as she had began shaking her head
She suddenly stopped
Her head, shoulders and arms were now covered in beads of sweat
And then
She screamed
And began shaking her head very fast again
Fast enough to shatter the bolts of self control holding Lanre together

Finally
Lanre was seized in a wave of panic
“Baby, what’s wrong?”
There was no response to his query
And at this point, the commercial bus grounded to a halt
Just a trekking distance from the last bus stop

There was a lot of murmuring all around Lanre
The passengers in the bus began to get out of the vehicle
The conductor, driver and other concerned passengers were all as shocked as Lanre
They had no idea what was happening

“Is she sick?” asked a concerned passenger
“Which hospital dey around here,” said another

There was a lot of commotion now and some of the passengers helped Lanre get his wife out of the bus
Lanre was now close to shedding tears but he steeled himself to remain focused
He didn’t understand why his wife would suddenly go into a state of shock
Or whatever state of mind it was that she was in
Her eyes were still slammed shut
And she was still sweating profusely
But was no longer screaming

Lanre knew for a fact that she was not epileptic
Neither had he ever seen her experience anything like this before
He was as confused as a man trying to navigate a Nokia 3310 by tapping its screen

Different people made different suggestions as to how to handle the situation
But their voices seemed to come from a distant place
And Lanre knew that he was gradually breaking down psychologically
He was about to lift his wife off the floor and carry her to the closest hospital
When her eyes suddenly shot open
She looked straight into Lanre’s eyes

Lanre looked back straight into her eyes
But he was afraid at what he saw
The warmness in her eyes were gone
It was replaced by a very strange gaze
There was nothing familiar about the eyes he was looking at

“Baby, what happened to you…”
This was all Lanre could ask before his wife shot up like a woman standing on hot coal
She suddenly broke into a run
And her speed shocked not just Lanre but everyone present
Save the timely interception of some men who were about 10 feet away
Lanre wondered how far he would have had to chase her
The men successfully stopped her
She struggled to break free from their hold
But the men held her down
Yet she continued to struggle and curse at the men

Suddenly, she sat still again and then began to roughen up her hair
Lanre was distraught
And then he asked himself:
“Is my wife going insane?”
He knew the answer to the question even before he asked
And at that very moment, his wife began to speak
The fact that she was talking should have been comforting
But when the implication of her words dawned on Lanre
He couldn’t hold back the tears anymore
Tears blinded his eyes
And he just stood there helplessly as the tears flowed down his face

“1, 2, 3 is my name – Jackie the tailor – Gimme my shoe…
See my pant… I want yam in the boat… Boat is tree and I am big
I can swim… I can laugh oooooooo… Mr. Butterfly, do you like my H.K Princess
UNILAG is a noun... Jonathan, gimme my shoe now... Buy me Gala and fish...
Don’t put salt o – I want to swim to Burundi and fly to Pluto...”

Such was the incoherence of her words and Lanre just walked up to her and held her
This was his wife
A woman he had come to love and respect over the years
And now she was mad
“What is happening,” he asked himself

He could see what was going on but he just didn’t believe it
A crowd had built up by this time and the size had begun to increase
Lanre knew he had to do something and soon too
Just as he was about to ask some of the men around to help him carry her
He saw something that made the hair on his skin stand on end
He saw an old man
This would have been completely normal
Except that this old man was clad in black
And looked disturbingly familiar

From the corner of his eyes
Lanre watched him
Lanre could not afford to look straight at the old man
Lanre was not afraid
Rather
He was extremely terrified
Fear gripped him like the hands of a drowning man
And Lanre still couldn’t bring himself to look straight at the man
Yet he knew he had to
He knew he just had to look at the man

When he eventually looked at the man
His eyes made contact with those of the old man
He had expected to see something scary
Rather, he sensed fear in the old man’s eyes
And then, he saw something else
Something that looked like guilt
But at that very moment
The man broke the eye contact
Slowly turned around
And began to move away

Lanre did not understand why the old man had been watching him like that
He looked odd
Lanre was almost tempted to think that he looked suspicious
But then, he heard the men and women around trying to talk to him

Like a bolt from the hands of Zeus
Lanre tried to recollect his wife’s sane moments before everything had gone awry
He remembered talking to her
He remembered the sweet and loving look in her bright eyes
He remembered how she had taken her time to compose and send him an SMS
He remembered reading her message
He remembered how he had wanted to reply her message
He remembered how the conductor’s voice had broken his concentration
He remembered how passengers in the bus had began to pay their fares
He remembered how his wife had given the conductor a N200 note
He remembered how other passengers at the back seats had tried to pay the conductor

Lanre tried to remember the last thing his wife physically did before things went wrong
He tried hard to remember but just couldn’t
And then suddenly
He remembered!
He remembered his wife slowly turning around to help an old man with his fare
She had turned around in her seat
Had stretched her hand backwards
And had collected the money from the old man
And then given it to the conductor

At this precise moment, something suddenly dawned on Lanre
And he screamed:
“Stop that old bastard!”
At first nobody understood what Lanre had just said
But Lanre had screamed so loud that even the old man had heard him scream out those words
Lanre noticed that the moment he screamed those words
The old man’s steps faltered
And then he had quickened his steps

As if on reflex, Lanre broke into a run
He dashed in the man’s direction
His eyes wild and unpredictable
When the old man looked back and saw Lanre coming
He tried to run but it was a futile attempt
He was slow
Lanre on the other hand was driven like a demented spirit
His steps were fierce, furious and ferociously fast

Before the man covered any meaningful distance
Lanre was already behind him and he lashed out with a slap to the back of the man’s head
To the old man, it felt like a straight punch from a boxer
But to Lanre, this was merely an introductory contact

The man lost his footing and staggered badly
Lanre grabbed hold of the collar of his shirt and pulled him backwards
The old man was now facing him
Lanre looked straight into his eyes and said:
“Did you think you would get away with this?”
The old man feigned ignorance but the look on his face gave him away
“Wetin I do? Ahan? Wetin i…”
Lanre cut him off when he screamed:
“Shut the fuck up before I break your bloody neck!”

By this time, the crowd had begun to relocate to where Lanre and the old man stood
And of course, they brought Lanre’s wife along
Even as she continued to struggle to break free
“What is going on here,” a number of people asked simultaneously

Before they could get an answer
Lanre raised his right hand into the air
And when it came down
It sent a blinding slap across the face of the old man
When a tooth flew out of the old man’s mouth
One of the men close to Lanre quickly held his hand before it could go up again

“This man is responsible for my wife’s condition. He is a witchdoctor,” Lanre screamed
To this, people in the crowd began to mumur
The old man suddenly spoke out:
“God forbid! This man sef don mad like him wife o. Abeg make una no let am kill me here o”
At his words, Lanre saw men and women in the crowd exchanged curious glances

Lanre knew how bad things could turn if he wasn’t wise and cautious
And so he began to speak:
“First of all, I want to be sure if those who were in the bus with us are still here with us
Wasn’t this the old man who stretched his money from the back to the conductor?
And if you all remember, who collected this man’s money from him to give to the conductor?”

When Lanre asked the question, at first there was silence in the crowd and then about five people spoke at different times
“The man is correct,” said one woman
“Yes! His wife collected money from this old man,” said another lady
“I was sitting beside the old man and it’s true,” said a young man

Just as Lanre was trying to decide what next to say
A young lady stepped to his right, moved her lips close to his ears and began to whisper
“Sir, I was also sitting next to the old man in the bus and you might want to check his bag
His bag never stopped moving and I don’t like the way he was looking at me in the bus.”

Lanre turned to look at the lady, thanked her, turned to face the old man squarely and said:
“Old man, kindly hand over your black bag”
At the mention of the bag, Lanre saw the old man flinch
His eyes opened a little wider and Lanre took a step towards him and stretched his hand to collect the bag
The man was however, more than reluctant to release the bag
Before the man saw it coming, another horizontal slap sent him staggering to the right
And then another sent him crashing into the crowd
The bag fell out of his hand and before Lanre could pick it up, six Agama lizards scampered out of the bag
The crowd scattered like gazelles sighting a predator
The fact that the lizards were without tails did not help matters
A lot of people in the crowd ran as if they were being chased by headless demons
Many were just running away and screaming at the same time
Majority of them fall and then quickly getting up and kept running

The lizards darted in different directions and everyone present did the same
Only two people remained exactly where they were
The old man
And Lanre
Even the men holding Lanre’s wife had temporarily left her
And she had blended into the crowd

Soon, the lizards were almost out of sight
But the black bag lay there like a sleeping lion
The bag just lay on the floor
Lanre’s eyes were fixed on the bag
And a permanent frown sat on Lanre’s face
Slowly, Lanre’s eyes moved from the bag to the old man

The old man stood about 7 feet away from Lanre
And Lanre observed him as he wiped blood from his nostril and lips

At this point in time, the dispersed crowd was beginning to come together again
But it was a very slow process
Men, women and children looking all around the floor
As if they expected evil spirits to spring out of the ground
The circle began to close again as the men and women began to come together once again
Lanre could see his wife still being held by the men who were previously holding her

He cast his eyes on the old man and said to him:
“Pick up the bag!”
The man just stood there grinning like a Demon with an Ace up its sleeve
For the very first time in his life, Lanre felt like taking a man’s life
He had never thought he could be capable of such a thing
He was even more surprised when the old man spoke:
“Now, you suddenly feel like killing me, don’t you?
Something you would never have thought possible half an hour ago...”

Lanre was shocked at the clarity of his English
“What did you just say?” he asked the old
And the man replied:
“I no talk anything o...”

By now, the crowd converged behind Lanre
All eyes present shuffled between the bag and the old man
Others simply locked their eyes on Lanre

Lanre took three steps towards the old man
And just as he was within the distance of a handshake
The old man took a step backwards and whispered:
“There are 2 kinds of evil Lanre – those you can see and those you cannot see”

For the second time, Lanre had heard this man speak good English
But when he looked staraight into the man’s eyes, the man said aloud:
“Oga, i take God beg you – No kill me o – I be old man...”

This time, Lanre struck out with a straight punch to the man’s face
He saw two of his incisors break and fly out of the man’s mouth
This was accompanied by a mixture of blood and saliva

“What did you do to my wife you old dirty bastard?”
Lanre was in a blood rage
Before he could strike the man again, some men in the crowd held him back
While three others moved towards the old man and held him

One of the men holding Lanre spoke out:
“Oga, let us look for a solution to this problem
If you kill this man here, it does not solve the problem o.”
At this point, Lanre calmed down a little and his eyes darted to his wife
She had ceased struggling now
And just stood there with a blank look in her eyes
She had her eyes in the direction of where her husband and the old man stood
But instead of looking at them
She appeared to be looking through them
Physically present
Yet mentally lost

Lanre walked over to her and he held her hand
But she didn’t respond the way she normally would
She just stood there like a flexible human-sized robot
He walked her to where the old man stood
And said to the old man:
“What else do you have inside that bag?”
The old man’s countenance suddenly changed
He now appeared sober and remorseful
He then said:
“I go talk o – Abeg no blow me again...
Calabash dey inside, tongue dey inside, cowries dey inside, handkerchief dey inside and black powder dey inside too”

“Bring them out,” Lanre said to him
At first, the old man hesitated
But when he cast his eyes at Lanre
He knew he would only be more than eager to beat him to death
And so he began to bring out the content of the bag

For Lanre, it was a slow process
So, slow, he felt it was happening in a dream and he was watching it
The old man pulled out what clearly looked like a dry tongue
And then he pulled out a black handkerchief

Suddenly, Lanre screamed:
“Stop!”
He felt every eyes present fall on him
And then he spoke again
His words were directed at the old man:
“What was the first thing you brought out of that bag?”

The man looked around at the faces in the crowd
He could tell that while many of them just stood there
The slightest sudden movement was capable of causing them to disperse
On their faces stood different shades of emotions
He saw anger
Fear
And uncertainty
The old man knew which of those emotions had the strongest hold on them

He was not afraid of anyone in the crowd
With the exception of Lanre
When he looked into Lanre’s face and eyes
He saw a man on the brink of madness
Madness born out of frustration, anger and unadulterated fury

“Speak up,” Lanre’s voice thundered out
“Na tongue!”
Lanre did not let himself get distracted by the murmuring crowd
“Blood of Jesus,” said a woman carrying a yellow bag
“Alahu Akbar!” said a man with a beard and wearing a caftan
“Ha!”, “Yeeee!”, “Osanobua,” “Olorun oba o” were the words many others were able to utter”
Lanre remained unaffected by the crowd’s reaction
Instead
He remained focused on the old man
“Tongue of what?”
He asked the old man

Lanre was not surprised when the old man did not answer the question
He could tell this man was an agent of darkness
And he knew time was not on his side
And so he knew what to do
As he made to take a step towards the old man
The man opened his bloodied lips and began to speak

“Na human being tongue,” he swiftly answered
And Lanre held back his step towards the man
He knew this man was not stupid
Far from it
Lanre looked straight into his eyes again
And he saw the intelligence that came with knowledge and old age
He also saw something else

On another day
The look could have forced Lanre’s heart to beat faster out of fear
But not this day
Not this moment

An elderly man in the crowed stepped forward from behind Lanre
And said:
“Old man, you will continue to bring out the remaining objects from your bag
And as you bring them out, you will mention what they are
Do you understand,” the man asked

“Oga mi – I hear you,” came the old man’s reply
Lanre simply stayed quiet but remained very tense
The elderly man added:
“If you waste our time, we will allow this man do what he pleases with you.”

At this, the old man looked straight at Lanre
Clearly understanding the implication of what the elderly man had just said

The old man slowly dipped his hand into the black bag
And brought out a handful of cowries and dropped them on the floor
“Cowries,” said the old man

The circle of the crowd grew slightly larger
And Lanre knew why
Majority of them were clearly still afraid of this old man
And what he might be capable of

He couldn’t blame them
But Lanre knew that anger, if allowed to rise towards the gates of insanity
Had the potential to tear down the barricade of fear

The man dipped his hand into the bag again
And brought out a calabash
“This na calabash”

What Lanre did next came as a surprise to everyone...

The final chapter of this thrilling sequel gets posted tomorrow

Hope you all enjoyed it? If you did, join us tomorrow night as we bring you 'The Last Bus Stop III'


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