Saturday, April 06, 2013

The Last Bus Stop - Part III [a short story by Tha Naija POET]




PART III

Advisory Content:
This poem contains some strong language.
 
He suddenly moved towards the old man
Who wanted to turn around to run away
But was prevented from doing so by the wall of humans behind him

Lanre snatched the black bag from the old man and turned it upside down
And out came a necklace made with cowries and another made with black beads
Other items that Lanre could make out were little plastic containers that contained liquid content, broom sticks, a strange looking mirror
And several others that Lanre could not make out

Lanre felt himself gradually losing his sanity
And with the little strength and reason left in him, he said to the man:
“For the very last time, what did you do to my wife?”

When the old man opened his mouth, Lanre could see the space left by his missing teeth and he was more than eager to hear what the man would way

He made a quick vow that if the man denied knowledge of his wife’s condition
He would cover the distance between them and break the man’s neck

“Oga, make I no lie – We don use your wife”
A part of Lanre had wished the man would deny but what he just said took the breath out of him
“You have done what?” Lanre asked the old man out aloud
“I say we don use your wife…”
Lanre thundered back:
“You must be mad! Who is we and what have you used her for?
What the hell are you talking about?”

“You say make I talk true and I don talk the truth
Na my senior herbalist for shrine send me come town make I find person wey we go use…”

Lanre made to dash at the old man but he was stopped
Lanre began to scream and struggle to break free
But the men who held him back tightened their grip on him

The elderly man who had previously spoken stepped forward towards the old man
And said:
“Old man! Tell us the solution to this problem
If you do not return this woman to her senses, we will approve your death here”

The elderly man looked towards Lanre and said:
“Sir, you just have to calm down and let us find a solution to this problem
The old man has admitted being responsible for whatever has happened here
He must have a solution
The most important thing is that we do not allow him leave this place
There must be a solution but you must help us to help you…”

The man’s words seemed to calm Lanre down a bit and he ceased struggling a little
And then stayed still
“Tell them to leave me alone,” Lanre said to the elderly man

The man gave the men holding Lanre an approving look and nod
And they released their hold on Lanre

“Old man, how are you going to make this woman well again? You must find a cure for…”, said the elderly man before the old man cut him short
He looked straight into Lanre’s eyes and Lanre saw a familiar darkness in it
“I get cure,” the old man said aloud to the hearing of everyone present

The murmur of the crowd got louder
And the elderly man raised his hand to call for decorum in the crowd
When the crowd quieted down a little, the elderly man spoke:
“Thanks to God Almighty
Why didn’t you tell us all along that you have a cure?
You would have saved yourself a lot of trouble and pain…”

“Save my time,” Lanre cut in
“Cure her right now!”

The old man slowly lowered his gaze till it met the floor
And as Lanre’s eyes followed the old man’s face
Lanre could have sworn that he saw something like a smile on his face

“And what’s freaking funny here Old man?”
Everyone suddenly looked from Lanre then to the old man
Lanre looked at the old man’s face again
And saw that he now wore a straight face
He looked at the elderly man and said:
“Tell this man to cure my wife before I lose my temper”

The elderly man looked at Lanre
And then turned to cast his eyes upon the old man
“You heard what the man said
Cure his wife and I give you my word not to let anyone here harm you”

The old man raised his gaze from the ground to the elderly man and said:
“Are you sure? I be old man, please…”
In response to this, the elderly man said:
“I promise”

The old man’s face in the full glare of the evening sun
Looked like a pot-pourri of wrinkles, blood, dark skin and dirt
A strange silence fell upon the gathering
And Lanre could almost feel a malignant and unseen presence
And he summoned all the strength in him to speak:
“What are you waiting for?
You said you can cure her
Go ahead!”

The old man looked at Lanre
And sustained the gaze for a second
Two seconds, three, four, five, six, seven, eight…
Lanre could almost feel as if he was being drawn into some form of darkness
And when he heard the old man’s voice
He was shocked
The old man was about 7 feet away from him
Yet Lanre heard his voice as if he had whispered straight into his ears
“I know you love your wife Lanre but she belongs to us
You must never forget what I told you earlier
…there are two kinds of evil…”

Lanre felt something like a crack in his wall of anger
He felt something evil and gravely dark reaching out to him
He closed his eyes for two seconds
And when he opened them again
He could still see the crowd, his wife; who now sat on the bare floor
The elderly man
And of course the old man who was still 7 feet away from where he stood

Lanre looked at the old man and asked:
“What did you just say to me?”

The old man now wore a confused look and looked around the crowd as though seeking a silent answer
People in the crowd began to murmur
And it was at this point that Lanre felt a hand on his shoulder

When he turned his head to the right to see who it was
He saw the elderly man and heard him say:
“The man has not said a word to you Sir
I understand the stress you’re going through
But you have to stay strong
Do it for your wife
She really needs you now”

The old man’s voice got everyone’s attention when he said:
“I go make the woman well again but the thing hard small o
E get something wey we go do but like I talk, e hard”

“What is it?” asked the elderly man
The old man now looked sober and very remorseful
So remorseful that Lanre felt a ray of pity for him
He could see that the man was really old and now looked very weak
Lanre saw the bloodstain on the man’s lips and chin
And for an instant
He wished he hadn’t bashed him up the way he did

“What do we have to do?” asked the elderly man
“You must make her well again
You do not have a choice
Do you understand?”

“I hear you,” replied the old man
But I must do something. Once I do am, she go well again”

“I said you should go ahead and tell us what we need to do in order to restore her condition,” said the elderly man

“What is it? Tell us” thundered a group of men and women in the crowd
The elderly man once again held his hand up to silence the crowd
And the people quieted down once again

After 10 painful seconds, the old man finally revealed what needed to be done
His remedy came in five words
The first word was one alphabet
The second, four alphabets
The third was four alphabets
The fourth was three alphabets
While the last was a five-letter word
The words sent the crowd and the elderly man into a state of intense shock
“Oh my God!”
“Jesus!”
Father Lord!
“Ye!”
“Haaaaaa!”
“Subhanalahi”
“Goodness gracious!”
These were some of the words on the lips of several people in the crowd

The old man had just spoken the words
Yet for Lanre, it seemed like an eternity ago
“What did you just say?” Lanre asked

“I must suck her breast,” the old man repeated
“Na the only way be that”

Lanre felt the last pint of anger in him evaporate
He felt like a destroyed man
There was no more fight left in Lanre
His legs weakened beneath him
And he slowly lowered himself into a sitting position on the bare floor
His eyes filled with tears
“Why me?” he asked aloud
“Why me?
I am just a simple man who works hard to keep his wife happy
I don’t deserve any of this”
Lanre felt himself choking on his own words
And just sat there
Hot tears flowing down his face
He couldn’t take it anymore

He looked at his wife and she was still there
A sad reflection of her former self
Her hair scattered
Her once lovely dress now stained with dirt and torn in several places
But in the midst of all this
Lanre could still see that she was beautiful
He knew his wife was his treasure
Lanre was not a pirate
But he knew that if he had been a pirate
This would have been his biggest treasure chest
A treasure chest named Ijeoma

Lanre recalled how her face had inspired him to be more creative at work
How thoughts of her had kept him going on days when he felt blue
How memories of time with her always kept him excited

Just as the elderly man was on the verge of speaking to Lanre
Lanre rose to a standing position
Now, the fire of anger that had been in his eyes all along had vanished
He looked focused and rejuvenated
Looking at the elderly man, Lanre said:
“I know you were about asking for my consent
And I am giving it right now
The old man must have his reasons for getting into this kind of business
But I believe everybody deserves a second chance
We all make mistakes
Moreover, I love my wife very dearly
She means the world to me
And I would do anything to have her back
Even if it means allowing an old man suck her breast in public”

He looked at the old man and said:
“Old man, go ahead!”

Lanre could see some hesitation in the elderly man’s eyes
And he said:
“I mean it Sir
Kindly help me get her into a standing position”

Lanre walked towards his wife
She appeared to look through him as she had been doing all along
But for a brief instant, Lanre saw what looked like recognition and extreme fear in her eyes and then the look was gone
Lanre held both her hands in his and said to her:
“Baby, everything will be okay
Just hang in there”

He unzipped the zip behind her dress
Unhooked her bra
For a brief instant, he hesitated
Pulled off his shirt
Used it to cover a side of her upper body
And removed one arm from her dress and bra

He walked her about 17 steps to where the old man stood
And when he was close enough to the old man
He said:
“We’re ready!”

The old man muttered something inaudible
Bent down and picked up one of the strange looking necklaces that had fallen out of the bag when Lanre had turned it upside down
He looked at Lanre as he picked it up and said:
“I must wear this one for the cure to work”

“It’s okay,” replied Lanre
The old man took a step towards Lanre’s wife
Cast his eyes upon Lanre
At first Lanre saw that look of sympathy, remorse and pain in the old man’s eyes
And he was glad the old man might become a changed man after all of this
“I’m sorry Oga,” said the old man”
Lanre was on the verge of replying when fear gripped him

He was terrified at what he was seeing
As he looked straight into the old man’s eyes at close range
It dawned on him
The old man’s gaze held him in a fatal choke
Lanre recognised the old man
The same man from his nightmare earlier than morning
The old man did not move his lips
But Lanre heard the familiarity of his malevolent voice

“There are two kinds of evil Lanre
Those you can see and those you cannot see…”

Those were the last words Lanre heard
It was time for the old man to suck his wife’s breast and make her well again
The old man slowly parted his lips and moved them towards Lanre’s wife
His lips slowly moving toward her exposed breast
Lanre could see it happening
Her breast just stood firm
Waiting to be sucked by the old man

The moment the old man’s lips made contact with the dark nipple of her breast
The old man vanished
And so did Lanre’s wife



Composed by Samod Biobaku

Dedication
This poem is dedicated to my brother, Kamil for his love and unshaken faith. I would also like to dedicate this to my unborn sons and daughters. I want you all to understand that sometimes in life bad things happen to good people. We all encounter trails and unhappy moments but with God, we get to overcome them. I love you all.  

March 30, 2013

2 comments:

  1. Wow! God have mercy. This story makes me have goose bumps all over my body. I'm so scared and it's very dark here because there's no electricity. Good story Samod but kind of scary.

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  2. Wow! Very good story bro keep it up more attention,inspiration and innovation I pray for u God bless

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